Today for Writing, I wrote a narrative story. Something I found challenging was writing my story. Something I found easy was creating this blog! Have you ever wrote a Narrative story before? Here is my activity below!
Narrative Writing - Term 3 2021.
At 12:00am in the morning, Jack was being held hostage by a man in a mask. He was tied up with a big thick rope and his mouth was taped with Flex tape. Jack was told to be quiet by his kidnapper who said in an angry voice “Someone you know has to come up here and give me $100,000,000 or else you're being pushed into the ocean!”
Jack could see a gun in his kidnappers hand. Jake points the gun at Jack with anger and bravery. He could hear the cars driving by which felt like he was home. He could feel the tightness of the rope which made him parazlyed. He could feel the bottom of the chair where there was a snake waiting to bite him. .
The snake was waiting with anger and was ready to bite him.
Luckily Jack had a friend named Ben. When Jack had time he quickly texted Ben that he had been kidnapped. He had a plan, his plan was to climb up from the other side, sneak past Jake and untie Jack. Jack trusted Ben because he was his friend and he was a UFC fighter. Unfortunately Jake found out about Ben’s plan on Jack's messages. He then let’s the snake bite him 10 times. The kidnapper hired a bad bounty hunter (Liam) to track Ben and take him down.
Ben could see Liam which was shocking and terrifying. He could feel his feet walking up the ladder which was tiring. He could feel his feet walking up the ladder which was tiring. He could feel his hands touching the wet and cold ladder which was freezing.
When Ben arrived at the Harbour bridge he climbed up the ladder quietly and was ready to save Jack. Suddenly when he thinks his plan worked Liam was waiting for him on the tippy top. They had a big fight but Ben tickled him and Liam laughed saying ‘STOP TICKLING ME’!. Ben then pushed him into the ocean with all his strength. Liam was screaming from the top of his lungs thinking he’s going to die.
It was alright because he landed next to the Police boat. When he turned around he realized Jake was behind him waiting for a fight. It wasn’t a long fight because the assistance of a bird smacked his head with its beak and that was the best distraction for Jake. Ben grabbed Jake and threw into the Ocean with all his might. where the police were waiting with Liam.
Liam felt cold because he fell in the freezing water. He felt angry because he was caught by the Police. Jake felt angry because his plan didn’t work.
When Ben found Jack he untied and they both went home free. Suddenly Ben was bitten by the snake and he fell into the ocean. But then Jack grabbed it and threw it on the other side of the ocean with all his might. Ben was alright because he was saved by the lifeguards. Ben returned as hero and was even on the newspaper and television. He felt proud and Jack felt proud for him!
